Anne's advice in "Shitty First Drafts" is well thought out and good. Being that she is a writer herself and understands the struggle and stress when writing anything. I really like the advice of writing three separate pieces. I was taught early on to write three pieces of drafts, but the way she described them was interesting. All my drafts even the first one have to have a form to it. I can not help myself it comes out like that. I feel like I can't concentrate on it if it's not in some kind of standard form. I'm interested in trying the child's draft.
The student essay did well at arguing his point. He used modern day television shows that are very popular to make a valid point that tv does not make you smarter. I especially liked how he used "CSI" and "Hawthorne"to help establish his argument. Two shows that are not immoral or promiscuous, but depict intelligence and maturity.
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